Struggling eyes!!

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                                            Struggling Eyes



Colossal crack in the soul

Inkling to the hidden pain

Not easy to make world feel

Shower of deserted rain

Sneered at me, queries rose

Answered with a strange look

Blur round world make me realize

Condition of my struggling eyes.


Life got upside down

Surmising things and people jingling around

Transient loss of golden sight

Widened the gap between truth and lies

Mirror of soul hit so hard

Connecting present by recalling past

Not any rainbow but dark sky

Reveals the story of my struggling eyes.


As it takes a long time

To give a new start,

Two days turned into years

To repair my broken glass.

Wish I could procure ,old-pristine form

In known crowd I will not be standing alone

The glass added color to my half life

World is now visible to my struggling eyes.

Comments

  1. Divyansh RajDecember 18, 2021 at 9:02 PM

    another amazement!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    keep going!!!!!

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  2. Radhey ChauhanDecember 18, 2021 at 9:24 PM

    good one!

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  3. Shweta YadavDecember 18, 2021 at 10:05 PM

    ✨✨😍😍😍my goodness,You r great.

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  4. Sejal PathakDecember 18, 2021 at 10:16 PM

    :) !!!

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  5. Amrita PandeyDecember 18, 2021 at 11:07 PM

    Ahaan!
    Amazing!!

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  6. AmitDecember 18, 2021 at 11:12 PM

    Insallah!! kya likha hai👌👌👏👏

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  7. kirtiman singhDecember 18, 2021 at 11:13 PM

    interesting !!!
    keep writting

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  8. UnknownDecember 18, 2021 at 11:15 PM

    Amazing! Keep going ❤

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  9. UnknownDecember 19, 2021 at 2:09 AM

    badiya !

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  10. AnonymousDecember 19, 2021 at 2:30 AM

    keep going diii.

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  11. richa sharmaDecember 19, 2021 at 8:00 AM

    The budding poetess is blooming...very beautiful creation 😍 ❤ ✨

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    1. HimanshiDecember 19, 2021 at 10:39 PM

      Thankyou so much ma'am for always motivating me to excel in the field of writing.

      Delete
  12. UnknownDecember 19, 2021 at 9:20 AM

    Very nice keep going 👏👏👏

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  13. tanya sharmaDecember 19, 2021 at 10:36 PM

    mstttttt

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  14. Zainul SajdeenDecember 20, 2021 at 2:41 AM

    keeep it up !

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  15. UnknownDecember 21, 2021 at 1:54 AM

    fabulous

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  16. HimanshiDecember 22, 2021 at 10:31 PM

    Thankyou sir..

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  17. nandita.dubey011December 23, 2021 at 2:45 AM

    nice...

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  18. Tools you NeedDecember 23, 2021 at 9:37 PM

    A perfect shot

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  19. UnknownDecember 24, 2021 at 4:10 AM

    awesome...............🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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  20. UnknownFebruary 1, 2022 at 12:27 AM

    Very nice diii

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